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I didn't know if there's a style manual for things like rank, so I replaces all instances of "Sgt" with the era-specific abbreviation for the US Master Sergeant rank (M/Sgt). Also, while the initial author was pretty thorough, I had to tweak the verb tenses and remove redundant "both two" in some areas that might be an artifact of someone who writes English as a second language. That stuff can be tricky to get right if you're used to something like the German form of verb conjugation. | I didn't know if there's a style manual for things like rank, so I replaces all instances of "Sgt" with the era-specific abbreviation for the US Master Sergeant rank (M/Sgt). Also, while the initial author was pretty thorough, I had to tweak the verb tenses and remove redundant "both two" in some areas that might be an artifact of someone who writes English as a second language. That stuff can be tricky to get right if you're used to something like the German form of verb conjugation. | ||
| − | At the end, the Long Range Desert Group patrol has two Vickers Ks, either in a twin mount or two side by side on their Jeep. --[[User:Maxman|Maxman]] ([[User talk:Maxman|talk]]) 21:06, 7 December 2016 (EST) | + | |
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| + | At the end, the Long Range Desert Group patrol has two Vickers Ks, either in a twin mount or two side by side on their Jeep. Their Chevy has two M1919A4s on pintles. --[[User:Maxman|Maxman]] ([[User talk:Maxman|talk]]) 21:06, 7 December 2016 (EST) | ||
Revision as of 02:07, 8 December 2016
I didn't know if there's a style manual for things like rank, so I replaces all instances of "Sgt" with the era-specific abbreviation for the US Master Sergeant rank (M/Sgt). Also, while the initial author was pretty thorough, I had to tweak the verb tenses and remove redundant "both two" in some areas that might be an artifact of someone who writes English as a second language. That stuff can be tricky to get right if you're used to something like the German form of verb conjugation.
At the end, the Long Range Desert Group patrol has two Vickers Ks, either in a twin mount or two side by side on their Jeep. Their Chevy has two M1919A4s on pintles. --Maxman (talk) 21:06, 7 December 2016 (EST)